Your OTS draws me in! haha I think at the beginning you have the establishing shot of a bus passing by and then a nice little blackout fade - then is a good time to insert a title of your OTS instead of the end, or at least some sort of text that would help build the tension? -maybe a time and date counting down?
Your OTS draws me in! haha
ReplyDeleteI think at the beginning you have the establishing shot of a bus passing by and then a nice little blackout fade - then is a good time to insert a title of your OTS instead of the end, or at least some sort of text that would help build the tension? -maybe a time and date counting down?